Hi Guys,

In a post on the roleplaying forum I describe a fantasy that I think could be developed into a good story.  I'd love feedback / to know if people like it since it's different from your typical mpreg scenario.  A copy of the fantasy is below and the original post is here:

http://mpregcentral.activeboard.com/t47031234/sci-fi-roleplaying-scenario/

The fantasy takes place in a fantasy world like Earth in the tribal days.  Humans are just like humans except we can also take on a "liquid" form (Terminator 2 esque but no actual shape shifting) for a limited amount of time.  Tribes contain men and women who have sex like we usually do, but only a few men capable of breeding (drones unable to take a liquid form) are born in each generation (1 drone for every 10 women).  Full grown drones are like tall uber-men with great strength, abundant facial/chest/pubic/leg hair, massive low-hanging balls and long dicks.

Once a year there is a "breeding week," like how animals have a mating season.  The body of a drone starts to make seed the night breeding week begins (during this night, the drones have intense wet dreams).  The drones awaken with a permenant hard on, incredibly horny.  Their seed is so powerful and intense they can feel each one inside their nuts begging for an egg to fertilize.  Drones can orgasm all they want, but they won't actually shoot their seed unless they're inside a woman.

After waking on the first day of breeding week, the drones are drawn to a common place (like a beach or a spot in the forest).  There the drones "stimulate" :) each other to overcome the unbearable hornyness.  The smell of sex coming from this man orgy draws in girls of breeding age and makes them incredibly horny.  When the women arrive at the beach, being in the presence of the drones causes eggs in their ovaries to be ripened and be released into the womb.  During this time a women's pussy tenses so tight the drones can't enter them (despite the fact that they both want sex so bad).

After some time that's really a half-hour / hour but feels like years to everyone, the women are done ripening eggs and their pussies open.  There are many more women than drones, so the drones travel from woman to woman having sex / breeding with them.

When a drone comes in a woman his seed starts an orgasm so powerful that her pussy latches onto his cock, locking the drone balls deep inside her.  The drone and the woman can feel his seed traveling through her breeding canal and womb at an incredible speed.  The seed quickly pushes into the eggs, fertilizing them.  When fertilization is complete there is a "reverse" orgasm.  The drone's long cock sucks in the fertilized eggs the woman's pulsing womb and cervix are delivering to him.  They come to rest in the drone's womb, which he now feels intensely resting just under the base of his cock.  The eggs will now develop inside the drone until he is ready to give birth to his new sons and daughters in one month's time.

Occasionally, an egg stays inside the woman making her pregnant with a baby that will develop into a drone.  She too gives birth in one month.  Typically a drone will impregnate one girl with a drone son per breeding season.

Drones spend breeding week making babies this way.  Since there are many women but fewer drones, each drone must breed with several women.

The month after breeding week, the babies develop inside the drones and pregnant women.  The tight, muscular bellies of the drones expand as the many children inside them develop.  The pregnant women grow quickly as well, their breasts swelling with milk as their smooth bellies expand.  All who are pregnant are very horny during this month, and satisfy their urges with whoever they can find.

When the month is finished birthing night takes place.  The drones and pregnant women are drawn back to the beech and labor begins simultaneously for everyone.  Strengthening contractions of the womb (for drone and women) manifest not as pain but as increasingly intense orgasms.  Toward the end of labor the orgasmic contractions are so intense there is a danger of death from the strain placed on the body.

The new drones are born from the women first, in the usual way.  Then the pregnant drones begin the final phase of their labor.  For each baby they carry, the drone has a powerful birthing contraction/orgasm.  The baby, in its liquid form, is ejaculated from the drone during this orgasm.  Shortly after, the baby manifests its solid form (looking just like a human baby).  This continues until the drone has birthed all babies.

Often in my fantasies, me and a good friend become the last drones left in our tribe (because of war or something like that) and we become responsible for breeding all the tribe's fertile women and bearing all the babies.